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exclusive Fanart done for El Heraldo Short Film Fstival
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I like your work, the overall look is very good, but I write this because I think you can improve it.

Ok here, first I think the prince Mononoke its the principal character of your drawing, and also its positioned at the front of the painting so his size should be bigger than the other 3 characters.

The princess and the wolf as the central point of view should be more detailed and have to have more careful with the little details. I think the princess upper body its to big in comparative with his lower part, just a little so it looks a little strange.

About the wolf, I think his right paw doesn't look like a wolf paw, you know you could use wolf pictures as references and also you could search for a wolf in some similar pose to this one. And the other legs also dont look to similar to real wolf legs his back legs the one at the light look a little short, the shadow of the other back could look better with a little more of shadow, also this paw are pointing to his left and I think in this pose should be pointing to the front. The lifted paw in the front look to big for his position. This about the sizes and proportions that I can see.

I liked the way you painted the fur and the way you painted the illustration, it looks like a Japanese paint, what I think was your intention. Also like the size and positions of the back characters but maybe if you decide to make the princess and the wolf bigger could make them smaller.
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EVE122 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is so beautiful.
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PemaMendez Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
thank you! :icontearplz:
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EVE122 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem
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Anastasiy Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
These colors are truly gorgeous
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PemaMendez Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
thank you! glad you like it :D
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flo463 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2016
great
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xitres Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2016
Very nice work!
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PemaMendez Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :aww:
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